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Black Vision

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A black haze
My vision blurred
Is it all but a dream?
No, not right
All wrong
It's no dream
I'm living a nightmare
If this is real
If I'm alive
Why can't I see?
Why does the light evade me?
I couldn't really think of a good title, wrote this during math class 3/3/11 I was thinking too much that day.. ^^; I'm uneasy about the ending but...
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QuirkyCuriousBex's avatar
This is what I call "poetic spew" -- straight-up honesty in the form of poetry. It could be taken literally or figuratively, but either way, the honesty is very evident.